NOT TO BRAG.....but....

I'm not saying this to diminish you or your project. ONLY to give an
unbiased perspective.

He doesn't say how it changed his life. I honestly think it's wonderful
that your comic book changed his life and you are eight to be proud
of that. But as a potential donor to your campaign I'm left wondering
what he means. I'm left wondering what you mean by "life changing".
Perhaps other feel that way. Knowing how your comic book changed
this man's life would really help.

Obviously his life has been changed because he says it has. I'd love to
know what his life was like before reading your comic book and what it's
like now that he has read it.
 
I’d love to believe that this is a joke, but I don’t think it is... Are you serious? Come on... Really? Are you for real?

I read your blog, as linked on your KS page. Interesting... Your “life changing” comic is there! Here it is: BIG TOM

And you’re selling this on Amazon? You had many sales?


If you are serious, then take this as constructive criticism; your comic needs work. Based on your comic, I would never dream of giving any money to your campaign.
 
directorik said:
I'm not saying this to diminish you or your project. ONLY to give an
unbiased perspective.

He doesn't say how it changed his life. I honestly think it's wonderful
that your comic book changed his life and you are eight to be proud
of that. But as a potential donor to your campaign I'm left wondering
what he means. I'm left wondering what you mean by "life changing".
Perhaps other feel that way. Knowing how your comic book changed
this man's life would really help.

Obviously his life has been changed because he says it has. I'd love to
know what his life was like before reading your comic book and what it's
like now that he has read it.
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I can tell I can count on you for honest criticism. Me and Isaiah ( the guy on the video) are definitely going to get more in depth pretty soon...good point.
 
mad_hatter said:
I’d love to believe that this is a joke, but I don’t think it is... Are you serious? Come on... Really? Are you for real?

I read your blog, as linked on your KS page. Interesting... Your “life changing” comic is there! Here it is: BIG TOM

And you’re selling this on Amazon? You had many sales?


If you are serious, then take this as constructive criticism; your comic needs work. Based on your comic, I would never dream of giving any money to your campaign.
Click to expand...

I can respond to this with one word to describe my writing style..." unorthodox"
Yes I've had some sales but I don't imagine I'll sell much until I actually start promoting it more.
 
Your comic book is far out.

I didn't really understand why the two giant/happy friends were fighting though.

Looks like it would be expensive to produce, if live action. Or do you want to go animation?
 
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