Are you shooting this yourself? If not, there are flaws you need to fix. You should probably get screenwriting software which can properly format the script rather than rely on Google documents. The formatting is really annoying. And unless you're shooting this yourself, lose all the camera direction. You really don't need the transitions either here.
The dialogue is kind of tedious. You need to get to the meat. Also, I understand it's just at a table. For that reason, the dialogue needs to be very exact and to the point. It was boring to read. You could cut out a lot of the chit-chat dialogue. Your page 6 should be your page 3. Seriously. Condense pages 1-5 into two pages. Honestly, I had to scrub through to see the ending. It was a let down. The short is tedious and uneventful as currently written. Given this is all talking heads, you should keep this script to six pages total. And the dialogue has a very expository feel. The characters lack development and are uninteresting. It's not bad just very underwhelming.
Overall, there are different directions you could go by bringing all of them into the same space and incorporate imagery to help sell the story. The format, structure and story all need to be fixed in the re-write. Good luck.
