Great idea with a really good and original premise. The only negative thing I have to say is regarding the different look between the two stories. The kids portion had some really good afternoon lighting with great angles and some excellent camera work. Whereas the adult portion seemed to have all been shot at midday with not as much emphasis on camera movement and interesting angles. The kid portion looked more like a great film to me, where the adult portion made me feel as if I were watching an episode of Walker Texas Ranger or something. I think some more use of the wide angle lens would have helped a bit.
But it was very enjoyable, I look forward to seeing any future productions of yours.
But it was very enjoyable, I look forward to seeing any future productions of yours.