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Old 05-27-2017, 09:23 AM   #16
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AMERICA LOVE STORY

SCREEN 10

28, INT.HIBACHI-STYLE GRILLING-EVENING

DAZHI TANG
Oh! There's no taboo between us. You like it, you can continue to smoke. Just be concerned about your health.

MARGARET
Then if I could vigorously abstain the addiction, don't you want me to become your sweetheart?

Joanna stands up, runs away.

DAZHI TANG
Really can't afford to climb high. Your fame is great, pictured on magazine cover.

WEDDING MARCH sounds. Margaret snuggles up to Dazhi Tang's shoulder.

MARGARET
This melody is very gorgeous,I'm really intoxicated.

Joanna comes back, stands in amazement, sits down.

DAZHI TANG
(catching)
Big missy, what's wrong? Very depressed? Unhappy? Worried about something?

Joanna squeezes out smile,fails,her eyelid wets.

DAZHI TANG
Oh! I've to adjust Joanna's sentiment right away.

Dazhi Tang sits over there, gets close to Joanna.

29,INT.HIBACHI-STYLE GRILLING-EVENING

Margaret pulls Dazhi Tang.

MARGARET
Today is my birthday. You've to sit with me.

DAZHI TANG
Both of us are an entirety,jointly issue a blessing.

JOANNA
(relieving)
It's very reasonable. Raise my hand in favor.

Margaret is speechless. Dazhi Tang takes out gift money, whispers with Joanna. Joanna hands over. Margaret opens.

DAZHI TANG
This is the Chinese custom. A hundred dollars symbolizes hundred years longevity.

JOANNA
(deeply moving)
Dazhi Tang, you're really genuine!

MARGARET
(forgetting herself)
I love you, Dazhi Tang!

30,EXT.BY MARGARETíDOOR-EVENING

Margaret is forward. Joanna holds a bouquet of flowers. Dazhi Tang takes a cake, shakes hands with Margaret's family members.

MARGARET
(taking seriously)
Mom and Dad,highly recommend,Dazhi Tang,my new boyfriend!

DAZHI TANG
(dodging)
My goodness!Margaret,you're so funny,male friend,non-boyfriend,grey humour.

Joanna turns round. Margaret glimpses.
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AMERICA LOVE STORY

SCREEN 11

31, INT.MARGARETíS HOME-EVENING

Everybody is busy, open the box lid, insert candles, strike a match, light candela, sing HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU.

Margaret makes a vow to a god, puffs out a candle, eyelash flames, screams.

Dazhi Tang covers up by his right hand. Margaret doesnít defend herself, she topples over rearwards. Dazhi Tang holds her body by his left arm.

32, INT.MARGARETíS HOME-EVENING

All pay close attention to. Margaret faints, holds up Dazhi Tang.

MARGARET
(admiring)
Arm is strong and healthy, palm is stiff, movement is nimble. Being absolutely true, hero rescues beauty, exceedingly wonderful!

DAZHI TANG
(being nervous)
Big missy, beg you to let me go!

MARGARET
Donít do that, then like this, simply marvellous.

DAZHI TANG
Donít crack a joke again!Iíll handle affairs, cure the wound for you.

MARGARET
Iím very pleased with myself. Iím not afraid of pain anywhere.

DAZHI TANG
Use wet towel,wrap small ice cakes, apply to the burn, until not pained. Salvage must be in time, delay is wrong.

Dazhi Tang takes a ice bag.

Dazhi Tang(CONTíD)
Put some ointment on the skin again, since wonít breakable, also not likely ulcered, no any vestige, if not, marred by a scar no consultation.

33, INT.MARGARETíS HOME-EVENING

Margaret asks help from Dazhi Tang. But Dazhi Tang asks Joanna for help.

MARGARET
(being mysterious)
Iíve prayed just now, Dazhi Tang will get me for his wife.

JOANNA
(paltering)
Dazhi Tang is her boyfriend, so you come to solve this problem.

DAZHI TANG
Joanna is her younger female cousin, so you should give a hand.

MARGARET
My birthday is being celebrated, so both of you come, donít shirk.

Dazhi Tang holds up Margaret. Joanna rubs Margaretís eyelid.
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