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watch Some stuff I've made

Jaded

Jaded

Hey guys!

I'd like to share these two videos that I've made. The first one is a thing I did for a wedding with footage given to me from the bachelor party. I had no idea what to do so I made it look like a hollywood trailer-ish thing and I think it turned out pretty fun.

https://youtu.be/jLqaGLz4VOs

A little more planning went into the second one. Its a corporate film I made for a hotel. I didn't get paid for it or anything. Just wanted to try it out and get experience. Its shot with my iphone and I learned that shooting with an iphone requires really good lighting. :) Next time I will be better prepared.

https://youtu.be/x5kqAY2G8fU

Well, Im not really a filmmaker. My area of expertise is music so I'd really like to hear your thoughts on that part.

Thanks


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Hi Jaded!

Thanks for sharing your work, liked both of them, and the Hollywoodish idea is fun indeed, but its a pitty that the epic music gets over the top a bit. Wish you would also introduce a bit of space/distance to the background music, and maybe narrow the stereo field a bit, cause right from the start, the strings a too prominent (specially from left) and lacking some pleasant Hollywood style room.
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Ah, good suggestions. By space/distance, do you mean lower the volume or giving the mix more reverb? The stereo field could def be narrowed down. I actually tried to wide it out to give the speaker voice more room in the center. Hmm.. I gotta touch up on my mixing for film skills.


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Maybe a tiny bit of volume reduction, and definitely some good orchestral verb. Stereo width of an orchestra also suggests whether it is close, or further away - I guess your widening effort made it sound closer a bit. Great job though!
 
The first one I believe could use more fast cutting. You could give it a try and see how it works but if I'm wrong and it turns out not good you can rub it in my face. :) But other than that with you got you did it pretty well. I enjoyed the shot of the waterfall it gave me a good giggle.
 
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