watch Night - Horror Short Film

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MasMash

• Mar 30, 2016

• #1

Hey everyone, I'm a 16 year old filmmaker and I've just made a solo short film called "Night". I'd love some feedback so I can continue to improve and become a better filmmaker. Thanks!
- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OJZ3DSPa5wk

 

Filmer

• Mar 30, 2016

• #2

MasMash said:

Hey everyone, I'm a 16 year old filmmaker and I've just made a solo short film called "Night". I'd love some feedback so I can continue to improve and become a better filmmaker. Thanks!
- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OJZ3DSPa5wk

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Good Sound Effects Added.I would like to see a shadowy figure than the cartoon eyes in the climax though.That'd bring up the intensity a bit more.

 

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MasMash

• Mar 31, 2016

• #3

Thanks for the feedback. I would have to agree.

 

Preston Hashagen

• Apr 5, 2016

• #4

Good job. I'd have to agree about the cartoony eyes but overall a good job. If you have after effects, look into some tutorials and such to up your fx game. Once you get a helping hand and get get off tripod shots your films will look even better. Handheld and horror go together well as long as you don't go crazy with shaky cam.

 

Murdock

• Apr 17, 2016

• #5

Be careful with the Foley stuff. For example: The door creaks shut, but he doesn't react until in closes completely. So, does that creaking sound add or take away from the scene?