watch The Abortionist (Short Film)

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JbelnapTO

• Feb 4, 2013

• #1

Hey everyone, This is a Short Film I Produced & DP'd, Just released it on the 1st, thought id throw it around on some forums and get some feedback, feel free to ask any questions... Enjoy
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TbUSc9unosc

 

8salacious9

• Feb 4, 2013

• #2

i dont know what to make of it to be honest, thats because of moral issues though.

but i did feel that some bits were too long.

i think its more suited as feature though, with maybe one guy whos a hero at the end trying to save her.. etc

 

J

JbelnapTO

• Feb 4, 2013

• #3

yea i said the same thing about it, length wise, thx for your constructive criticism

 

8salacious9

• Feb 4, 2013

• #4

JbelnapTO said:

yea i said the same thing about it, length wise, thx for your constructive criticism

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yeah i couldnt add much more to it than that, oh one thing in the beginning the speech its very hissy, need to eq it at least.

 

rayw

• Feb 5, 2013

• #5

It's tough getting your actor to not act so "actorly", eh?

Nice work on the "procedure room" set.
Gotta work on bindings that look they would work, though.

Camera angles an blocking could use some reference off of fave horror films.

Practice, practice, practice!
GL!

 

J

JbelnapTO

• Feb 6, 2013

• #6

rayw said:

It's tough getting your actor to not act so "actorly", eh?

Nice work on the "procedure room" set.
Gotta work on bindings that look they would work, though.

Camera angles an blocking could use some reference off of fave horror films.

Practice, practice, practice!
GL!

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I felt the actress was alright, considering that she is still in training, but the guy we got to play the priest was terrible, last minute fix, it was him or a homeless dude lol.
Thx for the compliment on the set, believe it or not, i funded the entire Art/Craft Budget with $30 in empty Beer Bottles.

Thx alot for the input i appreciate it alot