watch Bun In The Oven (New Comedy Web Series) - Episode 1

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pieceofweirk

• Oct 27, 2015

• #1

Hey guys,

I created a comedy web series - Bun In The Oven - about a bakery owner who tries to sell his employee's baby. After a lot of hard work, the first episode has finally been released! Check it out, and share with your peeps if you like

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lTTSfzYX5QE

 

maz

• Oct 27, 2015

• #2

It was OK, although the editing was a bit glitchy in places. Other than that, I think it looked nice.

I didn't really find it all that funny (I only laughed once - at the "...and a woman" line). I don't think the punning worked half as well as you hoped