Description. I believe that is the most important stuff of a screenplay! I mean, how shall you implement the movie if you don’t know what’s happening. And there’s description’s role. But how do you write it without overusing? Let’s discuss, which details are important. I wrote an example for it:
Ext./Int. – House – Day
HELENA (27), a blonde woman with amber-brown eyes and white-skinned, walks a path along in the garden.
She grabs one of the moving boxes, which stands by the truck of the moving company.
Helena goes into the house.
Int. House, living room – Continous
Helena stands in the middle of the living room now. She put the moving box on another box.
MALE VOICE (O.S.)
And there she is!
Int. – House, living room – same (shot by the cam)
Helena rolls her eyes.
Helena
Oh! C’mon, Jerry. You know, I hate it to be shot.
Int. House, living room – same
JERRY (Man) stands towards Helena. He makes a disappointed face. His cam is on his shoulder.
JERRY
(disappointed)
fun killer!
Jerry is looking for something else, which he can shot.
He goes outta the living room.
Maybe you can make it better if you don’t like it.
Ext./Int. – House – Day
HELENA (27), a blonde woman with amber-brown eyes and white-skinned, walks a path along in the garden.
She grabs one of the moving boxes, which stands by the truck of the moving company.
Helena goes into the house.
Int. House, living room – Continous
Helena stands in the middle of the living room now. She put the moving box on another box.
MALE VOICE (O.S.)
And there she is!
Int. – House, living room – same (shot by the cam)
Helena rolls her eyes.
Helena
Oh! C’mon, Jerry. You know, I hate it to be shot.
Int. House, living room – same
JERRY (Man) stands towards Helena. He makes a disappointed face. His cam is on his shoulder.
JERRY
(disappointed)
fun killer!
Jerry is looking for something else, which he can shot.
He goes outta the living room.
Maybe you can make it better if you don’t like it.