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One Sheet Help

I am brand new here (first post after my intro), and I'm hoping to find a few folks who may be willing to help me get my one sheet in order for my current screenplay. To start, I'm going to throw out two current drafts of the logline for feedback. I have some reservations, but I'll leave those for later in the discussion.

To prove to himself he is more than an idealist, a politically savvy labor union activist from New York takes up arms in the Spanish Civil War, only to find himself caught in the midst of military and political betrayals that prove an even greater threat than the fascists on the front.

Despite having no passport and never firing a gun, a labor union activist from New York City takes up arms in the Spanish Civil War, only to find himself caught in the midst of military and political betrayals that prove an even greater threat than the fascists on the front.​
 
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