watch Short film: Saya-ate

Good evening Ladies and Gents!

Very short film shot in Oslo, Norway.

http://vimeo.com/35077692


This film was my debut as a director, and I've already learned plenty of dos and don'ts from it,
but please tell me what you like and what's missing, so I can take it with me for my next project!
I would be very grateful!

Regards

Bjørne

I quite liked it but wish there was just a bit more of a narrative to it.

Thank you Mr. Worthing!
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

As for the lack of narrative to it, I fully agree with you.
I regret not spending more time on pre-production and properly thinking about how to make the narrative work. This was a very spontanious project. I just gathered the crew, and then went out and shot it without thinking much. I was so caught up in what the film meant for me that I totally forgot about the audience.

As a result it tells it's story rather poorly and maybe not at all, but I'm still very pleased with the film for it's other characteristics.

I enojoyed the visuals but it does need a better flow to the story.
Great special effects. keep us posted.