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watch Time Hunt (Sci-Fi/Comedy Short Film)

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MasMash

Hello everyone,
My name is Mason Mashtare and I am a 16 year old filmmaker. This is my newest short film called “Time Hunt”. It’s a sci-fi/comedy about time travel and the hunt to save the future world. It’s only five minutes long and i’d love to have you all watch it and tell me what you think about it. Constructive criticism is always helpful!
Thanks!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gOpUHRchK-A
 
Not too bad actually. I have several time travel/disruption projects myself. You have a few things to work on but for 16 I thought this was done very well.
 
Not bad at all. It looks good, got some really nice shots going. The only thing that I might try to work abit on is the delivery of the comedic lines. The actors seem a bit disinterested at times. Though all over good work.
 
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