watch My Friend Michael: Short Film

Hi there, was just wondering if you guys would check out my new film. Any feedback both positive and negative would be extremely appreciated. This was a university project made on super 16mm, over a 3 day shoot and made by students aged 19-21. All the relevant information about the film is in the description below the video on youtube.

Many Thanks

Roberto Oliveri

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g6-WzzBY7rI

the writing was suprisingly good, and so was the acting at some parts there. I would just say to improve on the audio and framing and you're in business!