Here are the first 3 pages of two scripts I wrote. I keep reading that it's important when pitching a script to get reader glued to it in the first 3 pages. Here are the first 3 of two scripts. They are two previous ones I've done, and not any of the new ones I mentioned before. Please pardon that some of the format got lost in conversion.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Zac4rVnIA_MwDdAUoUIx5PGZkuT9jdFtk8Sz1Mci5Mk/edit?hl=en_US
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz-r6jLbtxILmci9vSnda1y6PR7ynvndyId8fcUJ0v8/edit?hl=en_US
Any advice, suggestions, and criticism will be appreciated. Thanks.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Zac4rVnIA_MwDdAUoUIx5PGZkuT9jdFtk8Sz1Mci5Mk/edit?hl=en_US
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz-r6jLbtxILmci9vSnda1y6PR7ynvndyId8fcUJ0v8/edit?hl=en_US
Any advice, suggestions, and criticism will be appreciated. Thanks.
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