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Old 11-14-2017, 12:21 PM   #1
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[Short Film] The end of everything (Funeral Movement)

Hi all, this is my new work:



A shortfilm by mebitek cinematics (mebitek & Serena Pilloni)

A bizarre, surreal and grotesque pantomime, in which the Unconscious (based on Jungís thories) is explored, inside a mind afflicted by a personality disorder.

After the whirl and creation, we finally reached the final chapter: the funeral. Leading us to a Shakespearean reborn, but sentenced to survive in an eternal loop, until the end of time.

voice:
"And finally I reached the underworld...
As rain, as teardrops, you're slipping on the window pane and I cannot catch thee. Then, I look at thee through the glass of my imagination: idealised, perfect, mine, in a loop, until the end of time."

previous chapters:
1- The Unconscious (Cinematic Movement)

2- MebiStep (Beget Movement)


original soundtrack by www.mebitek.com
manufactured with:
- Native Instruments Maschine
- Spitfire Audio Noisemaker
- Spitfire Audio Albion V
- Spitfire Audio Labs Atmos
- Heavyocity Damage
- Spitfire Audio Labs Harmonic Piano
- Heavyocity Scoring Guitars
- Spitfire Audio Albion One
- Cinesamples Tina Guo Acoustic Cello Legato

the video was shooted with a canon 700D, 35mm, 50mm, 18-55mm lens and edited with adobe premiere pro and after effects

feedbacks are welcome
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Watched first two minutes. My mind started wandering because I didn’t know what it was about.
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Watched first two minutes. My mind started wandering because I didnít know what it was about.
is it a good thing about the short movie?
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I wouldn’t say so, no. It didn’t catch my interest. Harshly expressed, I found it boring. But maybe I’m not your target audience. I like films with a discernable plot.
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I wouldnít say so, no. It didnít catch my interest. Harshly expressed, I found it boring. But maybe Iím not your target audience. I like films with a discernable plot.
ok, however thanks for watching and for your feedback!
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Holy crapsy. The exterior shots are incredible.

Make a version where you get rid of the whole first half and open with the first ext shot. Awesomness, man. Flowers in the water - incredible. Followed by an underwater shot.
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Holy crapsy. The exterior shots are incredible.

Make a version where you get rid of the whole first half and open with the first ext shot. Awesomness, man. Flowers in the water - incredible. Followed by an underwater shot.
thx a lot for your feedback!
however I cannot make another version happy that you like the Ophelia like shot!
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