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Old 06-15-2017, 05:12 PM   #1
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Windows Media Player Please rate and give a honest review

Hi guys, i made very short documentary video(It was in sudden to make this). Please tell me what you think, be honest. I would like to receive some tips and feedback. Thank You

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Very cool! Love Indonesian food, some sambals, and beef rendang.

Man, if I ever visited I'd love to eat on the ground on banana leaves in a line, like that. What is that called and can you translate the title? Thanks!
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Very cool! Love Indonesian food, some sambals, and beef rendang.

Man, if I ever visited I'd love to eat on the ground on banana leaves in a line, like that. What is that called and can you translate the title? Thanks!
Aw thank you Admin! Come here and try "Nasi Timbal"

The title mean "Eating on the Banana Leaves" you should try!

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Awesome!
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Old 06-15-2017, 06:21 PM   #5
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Nice feel. You could add a bit of narration or text giving some info on what's going on.
The music at :54 could be lowered.
Good stuff
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Yeah there was some bit of off music at a point and I figured some titles of the "event" and names of dishes with a little history would have been nice. But I already like Indonesian food so I just liked it.
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Yup that was the spot, I believe street music is bleeding in.
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I hear ya, it looks delicious & fun
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