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Old 04-16-2015, 09:52 AM   #1
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3D / Motion Graphics - New works (Feedback)

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I'm a freelance VFX / Motion Designer, with a deep interest in film making. Here are few of my new works, would be great to get any kind of feedback. Thanks a ton!

Glasshouse (Promo, 3D)


Glasshouse (Teasers, Film)


App Promo (3D)


The Untitled Short (Short, Comedy)

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Very nice work.

Although the washed-out look of the fourth one isn't my taste.

I guess it's a comedy, so I suppose it doesn't matter. And I guess these guys are screw-ups, so maybe that's the point. But I'm always very skeptical about murders talking about their murders over the phone in this day and age. It tends to take me right out of a film/story when it makes suspension of disbelief more difficult for me. But again, maybe that's the point; maybe that's why Spoiler: they themselves are assassinated, among other reasons.

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Very nice work.

Although the washed-out look of the fourth one isn't my taste.

I guess it's a comedy, so I suppose it doesn't matter. And I guess these guys are screw-ups, so maybe that's the point. But I'm always very skeptical about murders talking about their murders over the phone in this day and age. It tends to take me right out of a film/story when it makes suspension of disbelief more difficult for me. But again, maybe that's the point; maybe that's why Spoiler: they themselves are assassinated, among other reasons.

Thanks Richy! Yes, the short film was supposed to be kind of an absurdist story. So I guess, it fits, but yes, I should've thought about the using the regular phone as the main communication device. Maybe should've added some sort of encryption-like devices before he makes the call. But yep, thanks for the feedback!
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