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Old 08-13-2012, 02:17 AM   #1
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This is a short, one minute comedy sketch, that I would like a quick critique of:
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Old 08-13-2012, 09:03 AM   #2
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Old 08-13-2012, 11:28 AM   #3
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One of the fine lines you have to walk with comedy is being careful not to offend any group with a joke with bad taste.

Spend more time crafting a whole story for a one minute film instead of a skid.

I've seen brilliant one minute comedy shorts by Ellen Degeneres. It can be done.
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Old 08-13-2012, 02:13 PM   #4
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I understand, but not all comedy sketches are necessarily stories. Many are PSA parodies, or just an actor talking to the camera. I can provide many examples.
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Old 08-14-2012, 05:08 PM   #5
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Well, I really enjoyed the offensive jokes!
Then again, I like it when films/sketches are edgy.

Good stuff!
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