Short, "The Axe Murderer"

[mussonman]

I've just uploaded a short sketch, called "The Axe Murderer" I would love some feedback on it.



"A group of rednecks hang out in a forest, while a known serial killer may be among them....."



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D8nFjKpDFBU

[mussonman]

and, can anyone explain to me how to embed videos on this site? i only ever get a white box

[JoshL]

To embed videos, you need the bit after the "v=", in your case it would be D8nFjKpDFBU

Put that between brackets and YT (like [ y t ] D8nFjKpDFBU [ / y t ] without the spaces, and you're good to go!

Like this:

[rayw]

To embed you can type in [yt], then paste in ONLY the goobledy-gok gibberish after the equals sign, D8nFjKpDFBU in this case, then close with [/yt ] (without that space in there).

1. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D8nFjKpDFBU
   
   
2. D8nFjKpDFBU
   
   
3. [yt]D8nFjKpDFBU[/yt ] <--- that added space there goofs up the whole thing just so that you could see the near-completed line.
   
   
4. Renders:

[mussonman]

I see...

thank you, gentlemen.

[lakestreetfilms]

Nice job!