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Old 07-22-2012, 01:12 PM   #1
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Post Concept Idea

Comedy, Parody, Romantic, short
Think Shaun of the Dead.

A group of teenage friends go to watch a film. Suddenly, "we interrupt this programme to bring you breaking news" "STAY IN YOUR HOME". There has been a zombie apocalypse
So, for once in a zombie film, the friends do just that.

They sit and wait, making conversation.
The film is a short about the troubles they face, the television that's broadcast and (primarily) the discussions they have.
The protagonist also ends up kissing the girl, there is a beat of romance and then a SLAP.

What do you think? Is it worth writing and would anyone like to help with long-distance directing?
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Old 07-22-2012, 02:26 PM   #2
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I also need a title, so if anyone has any ideas....
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Old 07-22-2012, 04:14 PM   #3
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remove the unnecessary romance and I think it's good. Shaun of the Dead's romance subplot felt unnecessary, so this one seems the same.
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Old 07-23-2012, 05:27 AM   #4
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Sounds interesting. You ought to just call it "STAY IN YOUR HOME."
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Old 07-23-2012, 06:52 AM   #5
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Have you seen Him & Her?



It makes makes me think of that.

If there was a zombie apocalypse, nothing would change because they're so lazy, and they and the camera never leave the bedroom anyway.
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Old 07-23-2012, 09:46 PM   #6
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Sounds like a cross between Matinee, Night of the Living Dead, and either MST3K or Rifftrax. Could be great.
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