The Accident - Comedy Short Film

[sleightlyprismatic]

Hey guys check out our latest comedy short film! It was shot while on vacation with the help of some of our cousins. Hope you get a laugh out of it!


http://youtu.be/vbb35s8zttk?hd=1

Thanks!
Lukw

[MTsquared]

This is actually pretty good. Got small chuckles through the whole thing. A few things could be changed, but keep it up.

[rockerrockstar]

I liked it. Very good. Reminded me of the 'Weekend At Bernies' movie. Love the part where you wake him up. That was good. Ha...

[sleightlyprismatic]

Glad you got a few laughs out of it! Anything specific anyone would like to see improved?

[8salacious9]

the lighting between each shot was completely different, i thought that was badly done, like one minute he has a shadow over his face the next minute he has a fully lit face...

it was put well together, although i only chuckled slightly at 3:00 im english so maybe the humour isnt the same, i felt there were certain points at which you had hook lined then failed to sink, the potential was there to make my eyes water but it never happened.

im a harsh critic but im also a fair one, and you need someone whos honest about the flaws right?

but i did like it

[wheatgrinder]

Liked it.
Flaws mentioned already.

Seemed too long.

[sleightlyprismatic]

I really agree with the length comment. Looking back it feels at least a minute or two too long. Oh well, something to think about next time!