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Old 05-04-2012, 01:27 AM   #1
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'The Standoff'

Hello There,

New to the community. Figured I'd get the ball rolling by posting a short I wrote and directed called 'The Standoff'. The language is NSFW, so... yeah... Enjoy!



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Old 05-04-2012, 02:10 AM   #2
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Had a pretty cool twist at the end, I don't like how every second word is "Fuck" It kinda takes away from it all. Thats just my opinion though.
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Old 05-04-2012, 09:45 AM   #3
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I laughed.
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Old 05-04-2012, 03:54 PM   #4
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Great short. Fast paced and fun narrative.
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Old 05-06-2012, 12:31 PM   #5
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Excellent. I laughed. Great little short!
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Old 05-10-2012, 12:21 PM   #6
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I enjoyed it.
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