GIRLS!!! You need some hot chicks in there. I'm guessing you aren't singing/rapping to
another dude. In that case, bring on the chicks. Also, this looks like what it is, a couple of
buddies making a video in their back yard. The song itself isn't bad. But the video brings it
down. For instance, when you are rapping about cloudy days and bright nights, that seems
like a good time to do the video at night. Stuff like that. Make the video applicable to the song,
not just some dudes sitting around smoking and shit.
IMO its not the smokin and drinking
that are cool. Its what you are doing while you are smokin and drinkin. A la - Chicks.