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Old 05-03-2012, 10:39 PM   #1
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Cheese grater Horror

Hey guys whats crackin, my mates an I put together a short film about an evil Cheesegrater, I know a lot of it has been done poorly, the colours don't match up in some places as we switched cameras so think of it as a D grade film. But let me know what you think anyway. Be harsh I wont cry about it :p There is only one way to get better!

We did learn a TON from this one and we have another one nearly complete, its about a pokemon card trade that went wrong, you should be able to tell the crazy improvement in the next one, well hopefully.

So if you got the time have a gander http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iFBX0-WMTHQ

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Old 05-03-2012, 11:36 PM   #2
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That was pretty funny overall

Why so much vignetting, btw? At first I thought it was a POV or something, but it's not. Crazy-wide lens?

Logline needs re-wording, too.

That was some goofy stuff, but entertaining. You plan on working for Troma, maybe?
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Old 05-04-2012, 12:41 AM   #3
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Thanks for watching it!

Troma?

Do you mean the black bars? I saw a tute on it an kinda went over bored with it

What do you mean by loglin swells?
thanks again
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Old 05-04-2012, 02:58 AM   #4
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Just googled troma, seems interesting, will have to check out some of their stuff.
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