I'm currently working on my first short. I've got the first draft done of my script and I'm looking for someone to read it and to help edit. I also need help in telling me if it makes sense or if it's too all over the place.
I don't want to post it on here for everyone to see. So please reply and I can email it to you. Private message me or you can just email me at firstname.lastname@example.org
PS. It's only 13 pages. So it's not too long of a read if you're worried about time.
Also you WILL be credited for help in the script and in the credits of my film.