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03-06-2012, 05:41 PM
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Nat, my hat's off to you for looks so confident in front of the camera. I freeze.
Looks great!
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03-06-2012, 05:56 PM
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Dayum!
Looks really interesting. I liked the pitch just as much as the teaser- and that's saying a lot.
Good luck!
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03-06-2012, 07:23 PM
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I like the concept, the location and the music. However, I feel like there should be some "horror" in the trailer. A little too much of the main character typing and searching with a flashlight. I want to be scared in the trailer a bit. Not sure how, but I'm sure you can come up with something.
best of luck.
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03-06-2012, 09:09 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by finderskeepers
I like the concept, the location and the music. However, I feel like there should be some "horror" in the trailer. A little too much of the main character typing and searching with a flashlight. I want to be scared in the trailer a bit. Not sure how, but I'm sure you can come up with something.
best of luck.
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Really a reflection of budget. We shot the teaser in 1 day for $500. Valid criticism though.
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03-06-2012, 09:12 PM
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Originally Posted by Modern Day Myth Prod. LLC
Nat, my hat's off to you for looks so confident in front of the camera. I freeze.
Looks great!
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Thank you sir, started as a performer, so pretty comfortable in that role. I rambled a bit, but just couldn't come up with a good concept that allowed for edits in the pitch, So 3 minutes in one take which is tough.
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03-07-2012, 12:40 PM
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Because I'm a nice guy, here it is minus the pitch video, teaser only. Same password "kohlman".
https://vimeo.com/38001604
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03-08-2012, 11:21 AM
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The trailer is done well, but it lacks a Lovecarftian feel. The music is too upbeat and the mythos touches were cute, but did not seem to be so much horror as kinda cheesy.
Changing the music would help a lot to convey more of a horror suspense tone. I would also look more at playing with the light and shadows and adding in some tweaks in post to give things more of an off feeling as the trailer progresses.
It is a very well made trailer, just doesn't seem like horror or Lovecraft.
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