A 3-minute short film starring Hong Kong actress, JuJu Chan

[Graeme Noble]

We shot this in one day on location in Hong Kong. It stars Hollywood & Hong Kong actress: JuJu Chan (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/JuJu_Chan) It is a sort of 'non-dialogue' short narrative film. Comments are much appreciated.

[Murdock]

At the beginning, when the cars are out of focus, why not speed that up and gradually slow them down to regular speed as they come into focus. Just a thought.

Did I miss something? What's the story??

[backfirepictures]

Looks good from a technical standpoint. Story feels like it could be a thirty second commercial for a high end perfume or clothing company.

[Sulaco]

Well that story sure does feel familiar to me! =p

I like the way it's shot, quite nice camera work. The audio though needs some improving, particularly the early outdoor scene. Try making the music play throughout the whole film but with altering audio levels I'd suggest. It feels more like a few scenes strung together rather than a cohesive whole.

Hong Kong's an awesome city though and you're lucky you got to shoot there! Wish I'd been that productive when I was younger and went there...