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Old 02-16-2012, 01:53 PM   #1
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Power Up
Released to the wild.

http://www.vimeo.com/wheatgrinder/powerup

enjoy.

I welcome any comments and critique, for future reference only, Ill not be making any changes at this point.
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Old 02-16-2012, 01:58 PM   #2
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Old 02-16-2012, 02:10 PM   #3
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I remember this!

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Old 02-16-2012, 02:16 PM   #4
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From how many posts and comment you ve made on this forum, weatgrinder, I though you were a good filmmaker.. But after watching this.. Wow.. You re f****ing amazing! Awesome job! Loved it!



See what I just did there ??

Did you use haze machine to get the warm deep window light in the room, when the girl collapses??
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Old 02-16-2012, 02:20 PM   #5
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Old 02-16-2012, 02:42 PM   #6
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Very nice sir.
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Old 02-16-2012, 04:14 PM   #7
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That's beautiful, Dan.

Got an E-Z fix typo on your vimeo page:
"When a mans love drives... "
Man's is possessive, needs an apostrophe.
EDIT: Two thumbs up!

Ideas from this to be applied to your next project, Hot Rod:
- The action in the jump cuts beginning @ 0:52 through 0:58 were/are so close enough they look more like frame skipping than time editing.
- I don't know if you wanted some of the beginning handheld camera work to be "as" uneven as it was. @ 0:58 - 1:07
- The sequence between 1:08 to 2:14 carries on a bit long.
- I like the "emotional isolating" slow pullback from 1:27 to 2:11. Might speed it up a bit, though.
- The laughter at the end was great. Absolutely wonderful.
- The closing credits graphics were also great. Did you build all that yourself?

Who here thinks Lindsae Klein's got that Kendra thing going on?
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Old 02-16-2012, 04:55 PM   #8
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Very well done, really amazing effects.
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Old 02-16-2012, 05:51 PM   #9
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Great job Wheatgrinder that was amazing. That was well done.
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Old 02-16-2012, 06:06 PM   #10
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LOVED IT, wheat! Very nice work. Beautifully done. Thanks for sharing.
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Old 02-16-2012, 09:27 PM   #11
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Did I mention how much I love this film? Great, great stuff here!
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Old 02-17-2012, 06:05 AM   #12
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Great stuff! Looking forward to more of your work What equipment did you use if you don't mind me asking?
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Old 02-20-2012, 01:06 PM   #13
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Beautiful. Sad. Excellent!
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Old 02-20-2012, 01:52 PM   #14
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great job. all the elements of this film are in sync and work in unison to set the tone
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Old 02-20-2012, 04:22 PM   #15
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Yup, well done!
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