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Old 05-16-2011, 07:52 PM   #1
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We Dont Curse - Rap

Hey guys, check out our hilarious new music video. We spent a lot of time filming editing and recording. I hope you like it. We filmed on a Canon 60D with a 11 - 16 mm lens. Enjoy!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2k3uy...el_video_title

Please let us know what you think. Were very curious.
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Old 05-17-2011, 01:40 PM   #2
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You should practice your "rap body language". Also, a lot of the rhymes seems forced, and I would practise the delivery so it doesn't sound so choppy. I would have tried a fish effect or even try to get a hold of a fish eye, for that LL Cool J- Phenominon look. Over all I enjoyed it but thought if the rhymes would have been better/funnier it would have improved it a lot. Is "a lot" one word??

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Old 05-17-2011, 01:48 PM   #3
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I thought it was pretty good. I don't think you needed to artificially up the saturation given how bright the colours should've been in the first place.

Looks like it's doing good business of YouTube so good for you. I thought it was pretty funny!

PS: Hey, Dr.Murdock!
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Old 05-17-2011, 06:53 PM   #4
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Old 05-17-2011, 04:07 PM   #5
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I thought the delivery of the rhymes were weak also. Which is a shame because some of the jokes are kind of funny, they just needed to be pushed further.
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