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Old 04-21-2018, 09:41 AM   #3
directorik
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Welcome to indietalk, Wade.

To need to intercut – your slug lines do that. Do not use
“continuous” - these two things are not happening at the
same time.

To make it flow better I suggest naming or describing the houses;
MICHAEL'S HOUSE or TWO STORY HOUSE
ROSEANNE'S HOUSE or CRAFTSMAN HOUSE
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