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Old 06-17-2017, 09:46 PM   #1
Blondike
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Just wrote my first script, would love some feedback on sci fi ballet short?

Here's the logline.

**Tormented ballerina-turned-thief and her bungling, criminal accomplice are hired by a secret theft agency to steal her former ballet company's prized Nutcracker costume on opening night.**

Genre: Thriller / Sci- Fi

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This is technically in between 2nd and 3 draft but I would really appreciate very honest feedback.

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