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Old 09-20-2017, 11:25 PM   #1
Blase29
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The Forgotten Battle (87 pages) "Final Draft"

Ok, 3 months ago I finished the first draft of a screenplay of "The Forgotten Battle" and posted a thread here asking for feedback. You can probably find the thread by searching. And I got some very honest and healthy feedback.

Since then, I have revised multiple things in the screenplay, took out a lot of unnecessary characters, unnecessary scenes, tried to make it simple with a little amount of main(ish) characters, took a break for a while, and made the script lean and healthy as possible.

And I am here to ask for feedback because I still don't know if it is good or not. And please, I really need this feedback at this point.

Any feedback is warranted and appreciated.

Thank you for your time.

Final Draft: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2g...ew?usp=sharing

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