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Old 01-04-2017, 12:33 AM   #20
FreddyLongSongs
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Originally Posted by MinutemenPro View Post
What has been said above holds validity. It is difficult to hear what is being said. I was able to make out what was being said, I just had to strain a bit to hear it. You'll find the suggestion of raising the volume a worthy note. It is tough to tell what the story is about exactly, although the title cards do help. Often I'll go back and try to get to the bare bones of the story and find the simplest way of conveying that message. Even having character flat out saying their motivation at times. Trailers sell your film, therefore withholding too much information from those you are selling to can harm you.

Thanks! Something useful and insightful and simply nitpicking.
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