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Old 11-08-2017, 06:22 PM   #14
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It reads like the opening of an episode for a standard procedural to me... Not sure if that's the kinda vibe you're going for.

To answer your initial question, I think it depends on your intended audience and how knowledgable they may be about the particular topic. Cop shows and courtroom dramas have their own tropes and their own 'reality' that may not necessarily reflect real life.

How important is the technicality to your story? How does it reflect on your story?

I think any technical details should at least make sense to someone with knowledge of the topic in question, even if it might technically be a stretch of the truth.
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