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Old 11-15-2018, 04:02 PM   #6
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Originally Posted by indietalk View Post
I don't think it would be too coincidental at all but I would create tension. In other words make their initial encounter awkward. Like he says something wrong, offensive, it comes out the wrong way. On the plane she's looking for her seat, finds it is next to him. She says something like, "Great, Mr. ______," the blank referring to the awkward comment. It's better to start with tension if they are going to hit it off, etc.
Vince meets Susie at the gate while she's emptying out her purse looking for her ticket. Vince helps her find it but brushes the encounter off as a one-time thing.

I could easily add some sort of conflict at the beginning. What I am doing differently is have Susie go after Vince, since typically we see the male be the pursuer.

I don't know, I'm kind of winging the conversation since that's what happens in the real world.
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