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Old 01-09-2018, 01:04 AM   #4
TEHFatGhost
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I love the premise, my only thought would be adding a few shots to add some tension. Such as a quick extreme close up of each of the girl's eyes as they stare each other down.

Just because it's a short video doesn't mean you shouldn't have a variety of shots. Your "A Simple Misunderstanding" sketch I think really proved my point. (also that was a super funny video)

Can't wait to see more of your stuff!
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