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Old 05-08-2018, 09:39 AM   #4
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From the little examples you have posted you have your own style.
I suggest you write an entire script the way YOU want to write it.
No more short examples on a message board - write the entire
script. Don't copy the style of other writers - write YOUR way.

A few people say you do too much directing on the page - so what?
It's your script. You want to learn. You don't learn by posting little
examples and then change it depending on what one or two people
say; you learn by writing screenplays.

Write five short films - 10 to 15 pages. Write your full length script.
THEN ask for opinions.

Are you up to it?
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