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Old 01-02-2018, 05:15 PM   #4
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Watched Part 1, funny stuff! You're doing some cool voice acting here.
Thoughts from someone that doesn't know the game:
6:00 It might be good to amp up your emotion here.
7:00 I didn't understand why this guy was attacking you so maybe a little explanation included inside one of the jokes would help.
9:00 This felt a bit long here, maybe it needs more jokes, or tighter editing.

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