I'd appreciate some feedback on this logline! Any critique is welcomed.
LOGLINE:
A free-spirited teenager and his narcissistic mother - both suffering from Borderline Personality Disorder - embark on a cross-country journey to reunite with their past lovers.
LOGLINE V2:
After a failed suicide...
Hi Everyone,
New poster but longtime lurker here. I've decided to apply to film school and one of the application materials is a 2-page dialogue between two people that reveals something interesting. I have two that I like so I want you to rate them if possible.
I have no idea what others are...