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    Logline feedback

    I think it could. I have a few things in my mind and I am making a map of the story as well. It looks promising. There's a lot of subtleties in their dysfunctional borderline relationship that can make for a compelling storyline.
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    Logline feedback

    I'd appreciate some feedback on this logline! Any critique is welcomed. LOGLINE: A free-spirited teenager and his narcissistic mother - both suffering from Borderline Personality Disorder - embark on a cross-country journey to reunite with their past lovers. LOGLINE V2: After a failed suicide...
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    [FEEDBACK] Rate 2-page dialogue

    Thanks Hi, no worries! I appreciate the honesty -- this assignment is definitely the hardest one for me and I know I need to tighten them up. I am wondering if I should pick a different subject to write about entirely that's more on the serious side of things. On the other hand, I want to show...
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    [FEEDBACK] Rate 2-page dialogue

    Hi Everyone, New poster but longtime lurker here. I've decided to apply to film school and one of the application materials is a 2-page dialogue between two people that reveals something interesting. I have two that I like so I want you to rate them if possible. I have no idea what others are...
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