The script is nowhere near finished...it's barely a first draft.
I mainly want to make sure that it's funny.
Let me know what you think, any feedback is appreciated.
Warning: Very Raw.....and for Lamar think Kevin Hart and for Kevin think Anthony Anderson
INT. GLORIA'S RESTAURANT - BAR -...
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Dude you got just over a month as a free man. That's just enough time to.....you know.[/CENTER]
Lamar makes a closed fist and motions it punching through his other hand simulating*sex.
Kevin looks at him with a blank stare.
Kevin
What...what's that? I...
Logline: A seemingly upstanding husband enthralled in a nasty divorce is challenged when his secret indiscretions are brought to light by a mysterious hacker forcing him into public humility through a series of terroristic threats.
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INT. PARK, RIDDELL AND RAKOWSKY LAW FIRM...