Thanks for the feedback Maz. Some of the things you noted were enlightening so I appreciated you taking the time to read the screenplay sample and generate feedback. Constructive criticism is always welcome as it will help me iterate the screenplay further and evolve the project. So your words...
Hey everyone. Glad to have joined the forum.
I've been working on a science fiction screenplay entitled Superhuman for several years now. The screenplay includes some innovative new ideas in terms of its visuals and depiction of action. It's truly a labour of love. Development of the screenplay...