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Would anyone be willing to give it a quick read? It's 15 pgs and I'm mainly trying to gauge the level of clarity and make sure everything reads okay.

Here's the logline. **Tormented ballerina-turned-thief and her bungling, criminal accomplice are hired by a secret theft agency to steal her former ballet company's prized Nutcracker costume on opening night.** Genre: Thriller / Sci- Fi aa This is technically in between 2nd and 3 draft but I...

Yeah, the thing with murder is, I'd say I have around 1-2 minutes MAX (probably less) to establish what she did in the past (not fully) and then move forward with the storyline. I feel for this to work..the audience most know she has a dark past from the beginning in order to make her actions...

Not initially but her featuring in an ad that is shown around the world would do.

This is a 12 minute short film. **Logline**: When a famous ballerina is forced to retire due to controversy, she now lives a life of anonymity working for a struggling ad agency but then faces the choice of revealing her identity when she must fill in for a dancer during a commercial shoot that...

Firstly, I would like to say a big big thanks for writing out a reply this long. In terms of the glaring issues, after mulling over the film the past 6 weeks or so I must say that I completely agree with your assessment. 1. Availability of cast and crew The main models were only available...

Why was she speechless? Anyway, here is the final film. https://vimeo.com/130815429 Stands at 4k views, have got some extremely good feedback. Lots to improve though. The film also got featured on the official Facebook page for DJI

Featured on the official DJI FB page

Yeah, I was surprised at how strong some of the comments were haha. But I totally agree with you and it was one of the main things I was concerned with while drafting the concept. It's all a learning curve but I definitely would have focused more on constructing a stronger story if a few...

https://vimeo.com/130815429 Shot on Panasonic GH4. Took 5 takes on the day.. No prior rehearsals.

Well the film just got accepted to be shown at a young filmmakers festival screening in London. Managed to secure a magazine publication as welll.

Someone ban this dude.

New and improved trailer https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M_XBkLjgHyQ

The trailer is hidden for now, because we're still testing. In fact, here is the updated trailer as I've now got rid of the reversed motion. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xbJZ3VV42gE Birdman is a feature though, so they have a lot more to work with in terms of footage. There is no real...

If I were to link you the cut of my film(12 minutes long), could you possibly give me an honest critique of it?

We had 3 hours to completely run through a one take in real time. 12 minutes in slow motion. If I were to cut the trailer up to show more of the film, I feel like two this would be achieved.. 1. We'd lose the essence of the film. It's a one take and cutting it up I think would detract from...

Haha, please could you elaborate? Why was she speechless?

Thanks for the feedback. In terms of publicists, how would I find one? and realistically how would they get on board a short? Fashion films are all about the aesthetics, so that's what I pretty much focused on throughout. Honestly, I just wanted a weird poster. The image will make a lot...

This is the email I've been sending out.. Here is the link the unlisted trailer https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=25KUvnuO1_w

I haven't been creating a relationship to be honest, and I'm not sure how I would other than @ing them on twitter. All I've done is simply sent out unsolicited emails. Most Fashion magazines which I've been targeting, do not feature movie trailers on their site. What they do feature is fashion...