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Great! Thanks. I look forward to your feedback.

Finally! A major magazine deadline got in the way, but I finally had a chance to get a revised draft pulled together. I sent it via email today--please confirm receipt.

Sorry. I had to be away from my desk for a day. I hope to finish a line edit of the script today and send you a copy. Then I'll be back on the logline 24/7 until I've got it. :-)

Thank you so much. I'll be down your way next week for a writing gig. On what are you currently working?

Got it. Thanks again. So I'm probably looking at a two sentence logline, eh? ;-)

Thanks again. I'm in the middle of another polish before sending it off to the agent, but I'll get you a draft as well if you PM me an email address. Thanks for the offer. So you're saying from a sales perspective you think putting Orwell in the logline may be prudent? That was my initial...

Love your logline! Thanks for sharing. From page 30 to somewhere around 75, Orwell is on almost every page, and it is truly these two men's interconnected stories that initially drew me to the project. Homage to Catalonia was my primary resource on much of the militia's day-to-day. In reality...

Well it's not a scene with Hemingway, but it may actually be one better. My protagonist saves George Orwell's life and comes to influence his politics in the trenches and during the May Day street fighting in Barcelona. That was actually the original logline--something along the lines of "...

Thanks agin, Filman. The inner journey is for the protagonist to become a man of action. The catalyst for his journey to Spain is a labor protest turned violent in New York City and his growing frustration that those in his political sphere (Socialists) in New York City are unwilling to do more...

Oh, Man! I have a feeling your insight is going to invaluable! :-) Do you think I can lose the passport bit? Despite never firing a gun, a labor union activist from New York City takes up arms in the Spanish Civil War, only to find himself caught in the midst of military and political...

Thanks. I think it's important to know he's an American fighting in the Spanish Civil War, but that aside, you're making me think bigger picture. So you're suggesting the logline should say how the central problem is solved? I'm struggling with that a bit. I thought the logline was supposed to...

Thank You! It's good to be here. I just posted my first query. :-)

I am brand new here (first post after my intro), and I'm hoping to find a few folks who may be willing to help me get my one sheet in order for my current screenplay. To start, I'm going to throw out two current drafts of the logline for feedback. I have some reservations, but I'll leave those...

Hi, All. I am a freelance writer who recently moved back to New England from Southern California. My daily writing (what pays the bills!) concerns fisheries at the intersection of science and sustainability, but I have an undergraduate degree and an advance degree in creative writing. While my...