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    Nicholl Sad Face

    Writing of compelling quality cannot be taught.
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    feed back on opening scene

    Different strokes for different folks but I generally don't like it when movies are played in reverse motion aka revealing the climax/a significant event first and showing the build-up to it second. Though, some movies that have incorporated such an introduction I do ultimately like - Before The...
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    Feedback on Script

    I went in expecting some sort of literal monster with it being set in the apocalypse and all. Does Nathan flash back in the beginning and does it indicate he is the one remembering? Overall, I liked it and the dialogue is kinda lighthearted for such a grim situation though that is justified...
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    Which Idea sounds better?

    But it's important that the causality is a seemingly insignificant person, the cop buddy isn't insignificant according to the force and wouldn't be belittled by his own kind. The cop is gobsmacked at the fact that people applaud him for such a (unintentional) tragic act and people think it's...
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    Feedback on Script

    Very well written in a technical sense, but I couldn't help but be bored of the chat between the women and Kevin about insignificant things in the world (like the moon) and it may have been significant to the story but I stopped reading before to find out so (at this part): "Eh, you were...
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    Which Idea sounds better?

    Ah yes, psychological, I forget about that form...................somehow.
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    Which Idea sounds better?

    Thanks, and not very different genres though. One would be a thriller-drama, the other would be a political-crime-thriller.
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    Which Idea sounds better?

    Idea 1: A cop kills an armed bomber and rescues the president but not without tragedy, a man is accidentally killed who works a low-end job, as reward the cop receives instant extended leave and a promotion- whilst on his leave, he notices everyone congratulates him on rescuing the president but...
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    Protagonist - a cruel murderer - what do you think?

    It's completely doable imo, my favorite films have a bad guy as the protagonist, Taxi Driver and Goodfellas for two.
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    The viewer must be knowledgeable about the film's subject to enjoy it?

    Say someone makes a film with video games as the main topic and applies terms which are only native to gamers and further so beyond mere terms (I want to do this but with something not as relevant and known as video games). Would it be hard for a viewer outside the realms of the subject to...
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    Opinions on this concept?

    Bad wording on my part, my understanding of creating/filming terms isn't exactly up to par.
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    Opinions on this concept?

    I'm a newbie to this forum and further so, practically new to screenwriting (wouldn't know the first thing, do know the formatting though which I learned a couple days ago, so that's a start). Anyways, been brainstorming Ideas and I think I've touched on an excellent topic which hasn't been...
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