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    Feedback for my screenplay

    Hi, dear Ride The Pen! I want to thank you for sharing your thoughts. Your review is really interesting. First of all, I need maybe to tell you more about the plot. Nicolas, the main character, meets Stewart in the beginning of the script. Nicolas and Stewart were best friends back in high...
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    Feedback for my screenplay

    Thank you for your advices. As you said, maybe I should try to avoid camera angles and such details. What do you mean by akward dialogue? Can you give me an example? And please, what do you unterstand so far about the story's direction? In your opinion, what could be the genre of my script...
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    Feedback for my screenplay

    Hi, everyone! :cool: I am currently writing a screenplay in a notebook. I don't have any blueprint and I don't use index cards. The big pieces of the story are in my head and I try to follow my instinct. I learn that Tarantino's creative process is a bit like that. I don't compare myself to...
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