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    Please, Critique My First Scene

    So, the reason why I have dialogue in that intense moment is because he is not about to commit suicide. This is why I never mentioned him putting the gun up to his head. It is suppose to seem like he is about to commit suicide. Yeah, no, its not going to be some stupid plot where he goes in the...
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    Please, Critique My First Scene

    I do have a quick question, everyone so far have been giving me great advice on shortening my action sentences and/or paragraphs which I totally agree with. However, in the beginning of Little Miss Sunshine (great movie) it has a ton of action paragraphs...
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    Please, Critique My First Scene

    Thanks guys for the advice. I'm realizing I need to keep the action sentences to a minimum. I need to write in the now and not in the future (like I know what is about to happen) and put my self in the audience shoes. Also, to get ride of parentheticals and to be honest, I never cared for them...
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    Please, Critique My First Scene

    Hi everyone this is my first screenplay that I have written and I would love for people to critique it. I am writing a short film about a guy who fines himself after having a bazaar experience. Below is half of the first Scene. Remember, that this is my first time writing a screenplay, but I do...
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    watch Writer's Block - Animated Short Film

    Great Work! Really like the originality of the of the script. You guys showing this at any film festivals?
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    Do You Need A Composer? Well, Say " Hello" to Me!

    Thanks Alcove, Your right I don't know what I am doing as far as the pricing goes. However, I am continually learning and implementing different styles of music. The reason why I said I can do dark and action driven score is because that is what I can do now. I will always update my...
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    Do You Need A Composer? Well, Say " Hello" to Me!

    Thanks, I will changes the link. But, no I don't have the MIDI format for that track. The program I use only lets me export it in .wav I'm sorry. I do have a converter, but, it does not allow me to convert to MIDI.
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    Do You Need A Composer? Well, Say " Hello" to Me!

    Do You Need A Composer? Free Music About Me My name is Jessica Sharp, and I would love to develop a music score for an indie film maker. I have been a huge movie score fan since, I heard Jurassic Park's theme song. The Borne Trilogy movies soundtracks are my favorite (I am an odd ball). Since...
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