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I totally disagree. The introduction is critical because its a certain kind of snow that sticks to everything and melts the instant it touches your skin. That kind of snow is very different from a normal snowfall that just kind of makes everything white. Tojust simplify it to "virgin snow" makes...

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I originally wrote this as a short story and adapted it into a screenplay so I can eventually film it. A few things I think need a little work are fleshing out the bounty (Jeremiah) a little more, and perhaps expanding or removing the past sections. Thanks for any input, greatly appreciate it...