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Hello everyone, I wrote this script over the weekend, and have been fine tuning it ever since. I would love to receive some feedback on the script. Anything helps. The script is titled, Monster and it's 15 pages...

Hello everyone, I am looking for feedback on my first script, which I hope to make into my first short film. I have been rewriting it for the last week, and I think I have gassed myself out. I want some fresh eyes on the project and hopefully some insight that I may be missing. Anything helps...

Hello everyone, I mostly lurk in this forum, but I think you guys are awesome and offer great advice. I just finished my first draft for a short film (about 18 pages) and wanted someone with fresh eyes to critique the story. More so than that, tell me your honest opinion of the story. Is it...

I started a thread not too long ago and it dawned on me that I never properly introduced myself. I am an aspiring Filmmaker from in Miami, FL heading into his first semi-professional project next week. I say semi-professional because I am not a professional filmmaker, but I am treating the...

I wrote a script for a short film I plan to shoot next month. I am having second thoughts because it seems a little too cliché. I only have about a week to fine tune it. Let me know what you think of this storyline: We begin with a mini montage of nature's beauty. Among the beauty, we find a...

I had a discussion with one of my friends. He seems to believe that there is no way to tell a true, compelling story with just one character. He says, there needs to be another person to interact with. Another person to bounce things off. When he means one character, he means one character. In...