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  1. Phil Gary

    screenwriting money confusion...

    The few hundred dollars is referring to the option of a screenplay, while the hundreds of thousands is when the screenplay is sold.
  2. Phil Gary

    Logline Reviews

    Our Logline Review Service has been locked at $10, at which price writers receive feedback on their loglines from not only the perspective of the industry (Managers, Development Executives), but also an audience and a professional script consultant. If you would like to read sample logline...
  3. Phil Gary

    Attorney slams Scriptshadow

    Thanks for posting, Susan. After I wrote that article I received an email from Zak Olkewicz, writer of Ink & Bone that sold to Dimension Films. It's good to have his support. I don't check in here too often, so if others would also like to share their opinion, you're welcome to email me. Thanks.
  4. Phil Gary

    Starting to think about a 2nd feature

    I advise my clients not to respond to such ads.
  5. Phil Gary

    Is it safe to post your script online?

    Hi, Richy. Yes, my advice is the same. If someone steals from a copyrighted screenplay that was posted online, the writer will have to spend/waste time, energy and money enforcing his copyright.
  6. Phil Gary

    Is it safe to post your script online?

    Thanks, First Son. I agree with you completely.
  7. Phil Gary

    Is it safe to post your script online?

    Thanks, First Son. And I agree with you completely.
  8. Phil Gary

    Is it safe to post your script online?

    Hi, directorik Thank you. These are character archetypes and are not protected by copyright. The writer in question had his entire characterization stolen -- backstory, distinguishing traits, the works -- so it made the theft very conspicuous. Other times it is not so easy to determine...
  9. Phil Gary

    Is it safe to post your script online?

    You need to consider the risks... http://www.philgaryarts.com/13/post/2013/10/screenwriting-article-is-it-safe-to-post-your-script-online.html
  10. Phil Gary

    watch Trailer for "In Da Street" my latest short

    Hi Damien, THAT is what you need to hint at in the trailer.
  11. Phil Gary

    watch Please support my new short "The Ultimate Challenger"

    I tuned out midway through this trailer as it was too evocative of a tutorial or lecture. The trainee fighter is not imposing and the techniques he was practising are underwhelming. In other words, the trailer isn't exciting. Also, if you're going to be adapting characters from various video...
  12. Phil Gary

    watch Trailer for "In Da Street" my latest short

    The trailer seems like a random collection of shots from the movie. It would benefit if it gave us a sense of what the story is about. Production is good, though, judging by the trailer.
  13. Phil Gary

    watch Trailer for our first project - Crosses

    I have to disagree. It's a competent teaser; cryptic enough to be compelling. And the film's gritty quality is admirable too. Yes, the visual effects are substandard, but that aspect can always be fixed.
  14. Phil Gary

    Selling Rights to my short

    It sounds as though he is indeed soliciting your film to screen before his features, in which case you should definitely license the rights, not sell them. @directorik: I used to be an entertainment attorney. We often used the terms Broadcast and Exhibition rights interchangeably. Sorry.
  15. Phil Gary

    watch Dark Memories (Halloween themed Youtube series)

    Jarvel, my response to Jeff's message on Youtube: Hi Jeff. Ironically, when I received notice of your comment here, I was at the IndieTalk website, where I was reading and about to act on Jarvel's request for feedback on Dark Memories. Also ironically, I actually stumbled upon that series...
  16. Phil Gary

    Selling Rights to my short

    If all he's doing is soliciting short films to screen prior to the feature, then he has to license the broadcasting rights to your film, the cost of which is highly negotiable.
  17. Phil Gary

    Selling Rights to my short

    The fact that he's asking you to propose the number is already a red flag as to his trustworthiness. If his business is acquiring rights to movies, he should be the one proposing the terms in a deal memo. More than likely, he's either hoping to distribute your film to earn a profit, and/or he's...
  18. Phil Gary

    TV writing question...

    No, you don't need to use them. Camera directions are only featured in the shooting draft of a TV script or screenplay.
  19. Phil Gary

    The WTF Horror Short Film of the Year

    There's nothing chilling about that story, and audiences will feel cheated if all you're going to give them is shock value. Also, you should never reveal the entire plot of your film, not here, not on Kickstarter, not anywhere except in your actual movie. The logline "A CIA field operative in...
  20. Phil Gary

    watch Love, Bundy - Teaser Trailer

    The trailer doesn't correspond with the logline, which is problematic because without the hook offered by your logline, this trailer seems to be promoting a generic slasher film.
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